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I've fallen in the dark
a shadow over my heart
my saddness brings me down
and doesnt let me up

i stay to the ground
and stare at my feet
as i walk through a crowd

of people who hate me
and i just walk away
tears in my eyes,
makes it hard to see

i've been taken away from those
who care
and i just dont seem to be okay
i say im fine.

but im tired of that lie
when will i see
that im dying inside
when will i let others see

deep inside my eyes
to see my pain
maybe they'll stop me from falling apart

untill i get the strengthe to see
i wont be any where near okay.

i'm lost in a world
of those the same
when im a different peice to the puzzel
no one seems to see

what makes me, me...

when will i see?
who will help me.
:icondeath-angel-ninja:

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what if i dont make it? will anyone see?

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:iconblaze090:
your an amazing poet^^ i enjoy the idea of this it realy speaks to the reader but it lets them put there own feeling into in at the same time wonderfull simply wonderfull

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My life's so pitiful!
Give me one good reason why shouldn't end it all!
If there's a reason i haven found it yet~
Pitiful by sick puppies (luf dis song)
:icondeath-angel-ninja:
thankx. ive been dealing with alot of stuff during school, and i guess writing it in a poem helps me get it out. but thankx, im glad you like it. ^__^

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I'll feed th sickness, as it slowly eats my insides.
:iconblaze090:
lol yeah i've been dealing with alot of junk myself^^ i hope to read more of your stuff

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My life's so pitiful!
Give me one good reason why shouldn't end it all!
If there's a reason i haven found it yet~
Pitiful by sick puppies (luf dis song)
:icondeath-angel-ninja:
im glad you like them, and i'll try to write more.

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I'll feed th sickness, as it slowly eats my insides.
:iconblaze090:
yay^^

--
My life's so pitiful!
Give me one good reason why shouldn't end it all!
If there's a reason i haven found it yet~
Pitiful by sick puppies (luf dis song)
:icondeath-angel-ninja:
^__^ i have some that i wrote in a note book, i'll have to find them and put them on here.

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I'll feed th sickness, as it slowly eats my insides.
:iconblaze090:
i lost my note book t.t

--
My life's so pitiful!
Give me one good reason why shouldn't end it all!
If there's a reason i haven found it yet~
Pitiful by sick puppies (luf dis song)
:icondeath-angel-ninja:
;w; awww.. that sucks.

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I'll feed th sickness, as it slowly eats my insides.
:iconblaze090:
i know t.t

--
My life's so pitiful!
Give me one good reason why shouldn't end it all!
If there's a reason i haven found it yet~
Pitiful by sick puppies (luf dis song)

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